Time : 2021-07-23 15:21:02
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Convenience foods have become widespread in this modern life. Some people even think that it will eventually replace traditional foods and preparation methods. but in my opinion, eating healthy to take care of the body is the most important for a healthier future ahead. That's why most families still stick to traditional food choices.
Convenience foods are used to shorten the time it takes to prepare meals at home. It's a fact that convenience foods are designed to be cheap, delicious and non-perishable, but the ingredients added to these packaged products contain added salt, sugar, and fat and are often high in calories. Therefore, it will be more difficult to control the amount of fat, salt, calories and sugar in your body if you regularly eat convenience foods.
Additionally, convenience foods may contain less meat, fish or cheese than what you include in homemade versions. Also, they tend to lack the freshness in fruits and vegetables that are easily found in traditional foods. There will always be an appreciation for traditional meals. For now, this is because these meals are tastier and healthier than convenience foods.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that building a good eating habit is very important in our life. Therfore, to take good care of your health, you should eat plenty of healthy foods, cook for yourself, and be less dependent on convenience foods.

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Convenience foods have become widespread in this modern life. Some people even think that it will eventually replace traditional foods and preparation methods. But in my opinion, eating healthy food to take care of the body is the most important for a healthier future ahead. That's why most families still stick to traditional food choices.

Convenience foods are used to shorten the time it takes to prepare meals at home. It's a fact that convenience foods are designed to be cheap, delicious and non-perishable, but the ingredients added to these packaged products contain added salt, sugar, and fat and are often high in calories. Therefore, it will be more difficult to control the amount of fat, salt, calories and sugar in your body if you regularly eat convenience foods.

Additionally, convenience foods may contain less meat, fish or cheese than what you include in homemade versions. Also, they tend to lack the freshness in fruits and vegetables that are easily found in traditional foods. There will always be an appreciation for traditional meals. For now, this is because these meals are tastier and healthier than convenience foods.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that building a good eating habit is very important in our life. Therfore, to take good care of your health, you should eat plenty of healthy foods, cook for yourself, and be less dependent on convenience foods.

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