Time : 2021-07-23 14:37:37
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Nowadays, we can find convenience foods everywhere from supermarkets to open-air markets. Those foods are getting more and more popular that makes people concern that they will eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. In my opinion, these kinds of foods will be prevalent but they cannot change traditional foods and cooking methods completely.
On the one hand, these kinds of food bring lots of benefits to human beings. Especially in the fast paced society, people are so busy so choosing convenient foods is a good choice. When people use them, they do not need to spend hours buying, preparing ingredients and cooking like traditional foods so they can save time for relaxation, studying or work. For example, many families in big cities order foods from KFC for their meals every week, instead of cooking. It just takes less than 20 minutes to receive their meals and their children really love these fast foods. These foods also can find everywhere and they are more likely to be cheaper than traditional food so poor people can afford to buy them. Moreover, they taste nice so people love them.
On the other hand, eating convenient foods too much causes lots of health problems. Comparing to traditional foods, they are not healthy, nutritious and delicious. Convenient foods, especially fast food are very oily or sugary and they are also cheap and easy to eat so people usually eat more. It leads to more and more people are in obesity and their health is deteriorating.
It is obvious that these foods can harm people's health. And nowadays, people care more about their health than ever and want to increase their life expectancy. Moreover, traditional foods are more delicious and fresher. Thus, they try to eat more healthy food and traditional foods are the best options. Therefore, people will eat more traditional food and methods of cooking will not be forgotten.
To sum up, people will use more convenient food but traditional food and methods of preparation will not be replaced.




















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Nowadays, we can find convenience foods everywhere from supermarkets to open-air markets. Those foods are getting more and more popular that makes people concern that they will eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. In my opinion, these kinds of foods will be prevalent but they cannot change replace traditional foods and cooking methods completely.

On the one hand, these kinds of food bring lots of benefits to human beings. Especially in the fast paced society, people are so busy so choosing convenience foods is a good choice. When people use them, they do not need to spend hours buying, preparing ingredients and cooking like traditional foods so they can save time for relaxing, studying or working. For example, many families in big cities order foods from KFC for their meals every week, instead of cooking. It just takes less than 20 minutes to receive their meals and their children really love these fast foods. These foods can also can find be found everywhere and they are more likely to be cheaper than traditional foods so poor people can afford to buy them. Moreover, they taste nice so people love them.

On the other hand, eating convenience foods too much causes lots of health problems. Comparing to traditional foods, they are not healthy, nutritious and delicious. Convenience foods, especially fast food are very oily or sugary and they are also cheap and easy to eat so people usually eat more. It leads to more and more people are in obesity and their health is deteriorating. It is obvious that these foods can harm people's health. And nowadays, people care more about their health than ever and want to increase their life expectancy. Moreover, traditional foods are more delicious and fresher. Thus, they try to eating more healthy food and traditional foods are is the best options. Therefore, people will eat more traditional food and conventional methods of cooking will not be forgotten.

To sum up, people will use more convenience food but traditional food and methods of preparation will not be replaced.

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