Time : 2021-10-24 11:07:26
Điểm: 5/10
Nowadays, many famous pop stars and well-known actors are being enjoyed by the myriad of fans in the world because of their great abilities and beauty. However, they do not care about the famous people in the history of their own country. Why? It's quite easy to recognize that the famous people in the young's thinking are the rich people, sing well, are pretty or handsome, have the perfect appearance, and so on. In contrast, the famous people in history are not perfect, the young think they are just brave or do huge things for the country, or even they are intelligent. Consequently, in my point of view, we should do something better to increase young people’s interest infamous people in the history of their country. In the first place, young people should be told the stories about how great the famous people in history were, what they did for the country or how they affected the world's scene at that time. As a result of this, the children or the teenagers can understand that they should look up to those legendary characters. Finally, doing the actions that those famous people did for the country affects the young positively. The young can do many activities such as bringing good conditions to the poor, the old, etc. This helps the young recognize the significance of the meaningful and increase the interest as well as the inspiration of the young. In conclusion, though there is a natural inclination to pay more attention to contemporary pop culture figures, an emphasis on quality texts could encourage young people to care more about individuals from the past. This will not cause a seismic shift but could have a marginal impact.

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Nowadays, many famous pop stars and well-known actors are being enjoyed by the myriad of fans in the world because of their great abilities and beauty. However, they those fans do not care about the famous people in the history of their own country. Why? It's quite easy to recognize that the famous people in the youngsters’ thinking are the rich people, who sing well, are pretty or handsome, have the perfect appearance, and so on. In contrast, the famous people in history are not perfect, the youngsters think they are just brave or do huge things for the country, or even they are intelligent. Consequently, in my point of view, we should do something better to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country. In the first place, young people should be told the stories about how great the famous people in history were, what they did for the country or how they affected the world's scene at that time. As a result of this, the children or the teenagers can understand that they should look up to those legendary characters. Finally, doing the actions that those famous people did for the country affects the young positively???. The youngsters can do many activities such as bringing good conditions to the poor, the elderly old, etc. This helps the youngsters recognize the significance of the meaningful deeds and increase the interest as well as the inspiration of the youngsters . In conclusion, though there is a natural inclination to pay more attention to contemporary pop culture figures, an emphasis on quality texts could encourage young people to care more about individuals from the past. This will not cause a seismic shift but could have a marginal impact.

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