Time : 2021-10-25 20:24:09
Điểm: 7/10
Nowadays, youngsters know more about international celebrities than well-known individuals in the history of their own nation. The reasons behind this trend are the development of technology and the entertainment industry; and the way that history is taught to young people. Thus, we need to find some solutions to make youngsters feel more interested in learning about famous people in the history of their country.
It is obvious that almost young people have their own smartphone or laptop with the internet nowadays. Thus, it is so easy for them to watch any international movies and songs or learn about international pop or movie stars. Moreover, when their peers are fans of international celebrities, they learn about those stars from them. In addition, thanks to the development of the entertainment industry, international movies or songs become so vivid and attractive. Thus, they draw millions of viewers around the world and social networking media, television or magazines provide a huge amount of information about the actors, actresses or singers. Consequently, youngsters in the world know more about them. In addition, although history is taught in school, many students do not feel interested in it. For example, many Vietnamese students do not like history because its curriculum is very boring. They mainly study it in order to pass the exams.
There are some solutions to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country. Firstly, schools need to improve their history curriculum in order to make students eager to learn history as well as famous people in the history of their own country. Secondly, besides textbooks, youngsters should be encouraged to learn about them by joining some competitions or visiting historical places related to famous people in history. Thus, they can feel more interested to learn about them and can remember for a long time.
Due to the development of technology and the entertainment industry; and the boring history curriculum in schools, youngsters know less about famous people in the history of their own country than international celebrities nowadays. Thus, schools need to improve the way history is taught and encourage them to study more.

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Nowadays, youngsters know more about international celebrities than well-known individuals in the history of their own nation. The reasons behind this trend are the development of technology and the entertainment industry; and the way that history is taught to young people. Thus, we need to find some solutions to make youngsters feel more interested in learning about famous people in the history of their country.

It is obvious that almost all young people have their own smartphone or laptop with the internet nowadays. Thus, it is so easy for them to watch any international movies and songs or learn about international pop or movie stars. Moreover, when their peers are fans of international celebrities, they learn about those stars from them. In addition, thanks to the development of the entertainment industry, international movies or songs become so vivid and attractive. Thus, they draw millions of viewers around the world and social networking media, television or magazines provide a huge amount of information about the actors, actresses or singers. Consequently, youngsters in the world know more about them. In addition, although history is taught in school, many students do not feel interested in it. For example, many Vietnamese students do not like history because its curriculum is very boring. They mainly study it in order to pass the exams.

There are some solutions to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country. Firstly, schools need to improve their history curriculum in order to make students eager to learn history as well as famous people in the history of their own country. Secondly, besides textbooks, youngsters should be encouraged to learn about them by joining some competitions or visiting historical places related to famous people in history. Thus, they can feel more interested to learn about them and can remember for a long time.

Due to the development of technology and the entertainment industry; and the boring history curriculum in schools, youngsters know less about famous people in the history of their own country than international celebrities nowadays. Thus, schools need to improve the way history is taught and encourage them to study more.

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