Time : 2021-03-19 21:56:20
Điểm: 7/10
Travelling always brings more pleasures and excitement to all people but what they prefer to go alone or with someone that depends on their personalities and circumstances. However, each view has advantages and disadvantages.
Traveling alone will save the time to discuss something about the plan of journey because everyone has his own standards and do not need waste time to waiting for any members in group during travelling then you will have more time to find down the landscape of destination. Besides that, travelling alone you can choose home-stay easily instead of hotel that must be good opportunity for you research something about culture, lifestyle of local citizens as you are not distracted by other members in the group. For example, it is flexible for solo travelers not only stay for hours in famous museums or sightseeing but also spend more time to hang out with local friends. Above that, travelling alone will help to build confidence that is supposed as power or energy for you to pick-up backpack for travelling whenever you like.
However, travelling alone sometimes make you feel lonely and anxious as no one share pleasure and sorrow during the trip especially when you meet some troubles, your companion will help to solve problem faster than just alone. Moreover, it must be more excited for you to travel with your best friend or family than alone since making plans for the journey. With perfect plans and spectacular ideas, the journey will leave many interesting memories for all people in the group through nice pictures. In my opinion, travelling alone just suits with the young people who need to discover themselves through practical experience trips. Most of people still want to travel with friends and their family because travelling also is the time to connect all people together for enjoying landscape and discovering traditional culture of locals.
In conclusion, it depends on personalities and the goal of journey to decide how you want to go but travelling alone brings some disadvantages especially oversea travel then it must be better for you to find suitable companion.

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Travelling always brings more pleasures and excitement to all people but what they prefer to going alone or with someone that depends on their personalities and circumstances. However, each view has advantages and disadvantages.

Traveling alone will save the time to discuss something about the plan of journey because everyone has his own standards and do not need to waste time to waiting for any members in group during travelling then you will have more time to find down explore the landscape of destination. Besides that, when travelling alone you can choose home-stay easily instead of staying in hotels that must be a good opportunity for you research to learn something about culture, lifestyle of local citizens as you are not distracted by other members in the group. For example, it is flexible for solo travelers not only to stay for hours in famous museums or sightseeing but also to spend more time to hang out with local friends. Above that, travelling alone will help to build confidence that is supposed as power or energy for you to pick-up backpack for travelling whenever you like.

However, travelling alone sometimes makes you feel lonely and anxious as no one shares pleasure and sorrow during the trip especially when you meet some troubles, your companion will help to solve the problem faster than just only you alone. Moreover, it must be more excited for you to travel with your best friend or family than travelling alone since you together will make plans for the journey. With perfect plans and spectacular ideas, the journey will leave many interesting memories for all people in the group through nice pictures. In my opinion, travelling alone just suits with the young people who need to discover themselves through practical experience trips. Most of people still want to travel with friends and their family because travelling also is the time to connect all people together for through enjoying landscape and discovering traditional culture of locals.

In conclusion, it depends on personalities and the goal of journey to decide how you want to go but travelling alone brings some disadvantages especially oversea when you travel overseas then it must be better for you to find suitable companions.

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