Time : 2021-03-23 08:58:08
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As we all know, traveling is a hobby of many people. But some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture. Others feel that it is better to travel with people you know. So, which one is a good choice?
Travelling alone helps you be an independent person, you don't have to rely on anyone. Your travelling will be very freedom, you con do everything you want and don't need to care about who you go with. Traveling alone is also a way for you to learn new things, make friends with many people and increase your confidence.As a single traveler you can meet and interact with locals more easily and make new friends. Therefore, you can learn more about your country in a more interesting and attractive way.Traveling alone will help you gain valuable skills and turn you into a more confident person.From there, you will have a lot of experience to develop yourself. But traveling alone sometimes makes you feel lonely because there is no one to talk to during idle times.
On the other hand, if you travel alone, you will often do things of personal interest and often do things that are different from daily routine, then when you go with friends there will be a lot of new ideas coming up that make you feel enjoy. Although these things are sometimes a bit "crazy", but it is an indispensable memory. When traveling with friends, you can share financial issues with them, have a companion to talk to you during the trip and you can also join group activities to get to know more about each other.If you travel alone, you will not be afraid that your actions will affect those around you. However, when you are with a group of friends, you will always know how to behave properly to avoid causing trouble to your friends. But group travel also has some disadvantages, most notably the disagreement between people. Since everyone has their own preferences, so planning and traveling can be controversial.
To sum up, whether traveling alone or traveling with friends, you will have a lot of memories and experiences of your own. Beside, traveling also helps you relieve stress, have a good time, relax and train your body. Personally, I prefer traveling alone because I like learning new things and making more friends.

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As we all know, traveling is a hobby of many people. But some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture. Others feel that it is better to travel with people you know. So, which one is a good choice?

Travelling alone helps you be an independent person, you don't have to rely on anyone. Your travelling will be very freedom, you can do everything you want and don't need to care about who people you go with. Traveling alone is also a way for you to learn new things, make friends with many people and increase your confidence.As a single traveler you can meet and interact with locals more easily and make new friends. Therefore, you can learn more about your country in a more interesting and attractive way.Traveling alone will help you gain valuable skills and turn you into a more confident person.From there Then, you will have a lot of experience to develop yourself. But traveling alone sometimes makes you feel lonely because there is no one to talk to during idle times.

On the other hand, if you travel alone, you will often do things of personal interest and often do things that are different from your daily routine, then but when you go with friends there will be a lot of new ideas coming up that make you feel enjoyble. Although these things are sometimes a bit "crazy", but it is an indispensable unforgettable memory. When traveling with friends, you can share financial issues with them, have a companion to talk to you during the trip and you can also join group activities to get to know more about each other.If you travel alone, you will not be afraid that your actions will affect those around you. However, when you are with a group of friends, you will always know how to behave properly to avoid causing trouble to your friends. But group traveling  also has some disadvantages, most notably the disagreement between people. Since everyone has their own preferences, so planning and traveling can be controversial.

To sum up, whether traveling alone or traveling with friends, you will have a lot of memories and experiences of your own. Besides, traveling also helps you relieve stress, have a good time, relax and train your body. Personally, I prefer traveling alone because I like learning new things and making more friends.

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