Time : 2021-04-23 21:05:25
Điểm: 5/10
Watching film and movies always is favorite entertainment in free time for children especially cartoon. With high educational films, children will learn a lot of useful things that sometimes can improve their behaviors and attitudes.
Not all the films bring healthy contents with high education then choosing good films for children must be the most important because children can learn some good things such as friendship, love and necessary knowledge about wild animal, environment and science...these lessons via movies sometimes are more attractive than learning on books. With films about friendship and the love children will learn humanity via film’s content and what good characters are through figures in the films then understand that friendship and love always are built from trust, forgiveness and loyalty such as frozen, the toys world or Dumbo...Going through films with the visually vivid world, children also learn more about nature, ocean, environment and wild animals that must more interesting than from books from that they know that how influence of environment on our earth and how important to keep the earth green and clean.
However these lesson are not always good for children as most figures in films have been idolize and characterize beside most of assumptions in the films of course different with the real life then applying these things into their real life will bring negative effects. For example, putting all their trust on someone who they do not know or their lives are delusional like film then it is difficult to integrate with real life. Besides that, children will imitate their heroic characters in films as fighting, enjoy adventure, show off power…in the real life that sometimes they will get risks for themselves.
In conclusion, children are easily impacted by films or movies then parents need to control or choose suitable programs for kids, however it must be better to encourage kids to go outside for activities or learn from around environment instead of spending time watching films.

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Watching film and movies, especially cartoons (ví dụ ngay sau danh từ) always is a favorite entertainment activity in free time for children especially cartoon. With high educational films, children will learn a lot of useful things that sometimes can improve their behaviors and attitudes.
Not all the films bring healthy contents with high education, so then choosing good films for children must be the most important because children can learn some good things such as friendship, love and necessary knowledge about wild animal, environment and science...tách ý, chú ý chuyển ý these lessons via movies sometimes are more attractive than learning on books. With films about friendship and the love children will learn humanity via film’s sở hữu cách với danh từ số nhiều content and what good characters are through figures in the films then understand that friendship and love always are built from trust, forgiveness and loyalty such as frozen, the toys world or Dumbo rối ý, diễn đạt lại, chú ý không lạm dụng từ then quá nhiều, rất khó hiểu và cũng không chính xác...Going through films with the visually vivid world, children also learn more about nature, ocean, environment and wild animals that must thiếu động từ more interesting than from books from that which (không dùng đại từ that với giới từ) they know that how influence of environment on our earth and how important to keep the earth green and clean. chưa có chủ ngữ, động từ rõ ràng với câu hỏi trong câu tường thuật
However these lessons danh từ số nhiều sau these are not always good for children as most of figures in films have been idolize and characterize dùng PII trong câu bị động beside most of assumptions in the films of course different with from the real life then ? applying these things into their real life will bring negative effects. For example, putting all their trust on someone who they do not know or their lives are delusional like film then ? it is difficult to integrate with real life. Besides that, children will imitate their heroic characters in films as fighting, enjoy adventure, show off power…in the real life that sometimes they will get risks for themselves. từ that có vai trò gì?
In conclusion, children are easily impacted by films or movies then parents need to control or choose suitable programs for kids, however it must be better to encourage kids to go outside for activities or learn from around environment instead of spending time watching films.

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Điểm: 4.5