Time : 2021-04-26 22:23:38
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With the rapid development of science, the motion-picture industry has brought many advantages for viewers. Kids can also learn many things in life effectively through this kind of media. However, in my opinion, there is another side of watching films and movies which affects in a bad ay for children.
Watching films and movies can bring many benefits for children in learning. From images, sound, real life will be recreated into clips, videos that help kids to discover life around them. For example, history documentary films can help pupils find out the events from the past more memorable and easier than textbooks. Kids nowadays learning English effectively with short videos on the internet with exact pronunciation and illustrative images.
However, watching films and movies can negatively impact children. Children can react as the villain does such as violent acts. There are more and more clips aim to have more viewers due to commercial purpose like on youtube channel in which behaviors of characters sometimes have the ethical violation. Some films having sexy science are not suitable for teenagers, they make them be curious about sex and ignore their studies.
In conclusion, besides the effective impacts, watching films can cause negative influences. Thus, the parents should monitor and control the contents of films their kids watching. For example, instead of signing youtube, children should watch movies through youtube kids,...

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With the rapid development of science, the motion-picture industry has brought many advantages for viewers. Kids can also learn many things in life effectively through this kind of media. However, in my opinion, there is another side of watching films and movies which affects in a bad ay for children.
Watching films and movies can bring many benefits for children in learning. From images, sound, real life will be recreated into clips, videos that help kids to discover life around them. For example, history documentary films can help pupils find out the events from the past more memorable and easier than textbooks. Kids nowadays learning English effectively with short videos on the internet with exact pronunciation and illustrative images.đâu là chủ ngữ, đâu là động từ
However, watching films and movies can negatively impact children. Children can react as the villain does such as violent acts. There are more and more clips which (mệnh đề quan hệ) aim to have more viewers due to commercial purpose like on youtube channel in which behaviors of characters sometimes have the ethical violation. Some films having sexy science are not suitable for teenagers, they make them be curious about sex and ignore their studies.nên kết hợp câu, sử dụng mệnh đề quan hệ
In conclusion, besides the effective impacts, watching films can cause negative influences. Thus, the parents should monitor and control the contents of films their kids watching. For example, instead of signing youtube, children should watch movies through youtube kids,...không nên đưa ra ví dụ ở phần kết

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