Time : 2021-05-14 21:31:08
Điểm: 7/10
Celebrating national holidays and festival is supposed as one of the best methods to preserve and conserve the traditional cultural features of nation. However, it must depend on special circumstances or benefits to decide how the magnitude of the event should be.
Some people believe that spending money on the festivals is a waste because it seems there are so many festivals organized annual with tedious contents but grandiose in scale that leads to many negative reactions of the participants. Besides that, witnessing some cultural festivals have been commercialized make people feel pressing that will affect so much on the noble meaning of these traditional festivals, go against the value of national culture. Moreover, it is not necessary to organize great festivals when these do not bring any economic benefits such as attracting tourists or introducing and disseminating local specific features…while the citizen’s living standard still is low.
However, some celebrating national holidays and festivals such as flower road decoration or organizing fireworks for traditional Tet festivals should be kept because these will bring a lot of spiritual values to citizens and it also is the best opportunity to receive tourists and attract overseas Vietnamese to visit their homeland. It will not be waste as some festivals are organized in order to celebrate traditional cultures, remind the young generation to preserve and conserve cultural inherits of nation and enrich citizen’s spiritual cultural life. Besides that, the need to participant in festivals of citizens is quite big with good intentions, organizing great festivals related to religion or religious beliefs must be necessary to meet their demands and help them to keep the trust on the life.
In conclusion, improve the spiritual life for citizens through celebrating national holidays and festivals must be important especially religion festivals. However, these celebrations need to be controlled from being commercialized and abused.

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Celebrating national holidays and festivals is supposed as one of the best methods to preserve and conserve the traditional cultural features of a nation. However, it must depend on special specific circumstances or benefits to decide how the magnitude the scope of the event should be.

Some people believe that spending money on the festivals is a waste because it seems there are so many festivals organized annually with tedious contents but grandiose in scale that leads to many negative reactions of the participants. Besides that, witnessing some cultural festivals have been commercialized make people feel pressing that will affect so much on the noble meaning of these traditional festivals, going against the values of national culture. Moreover, it is not necessary to organize great festivals when these do not bring any economic benefits such as attracting tourists or introducing and disseminating local specific features…while the citizens living standard is still is low.

However, some celebrating national holidays and festivals such as flower road decoration or organizing fireworks displays for traditional Tet festivals should be kept because these will bring a lot of spiritual values to citizens and it is also is the best opportunity to receive welcome tourists and attract overseas Vietnamese to visit their homeland. It will not be a waste as some festivals are organized in order to celebrate traditional cultures, remind the young generation to of preserving and conserving cultural inherits of a nation and enrich citizens spiritual cultural life. Besides that, because the need to participate in festivals of citizens is quite big with good intentions, organizing great festivals related to religion or religious beliefs must be necessary to meet their demands and help them to keep the trust in the life.

In conclusion, improving the spiritual life for citizens through celebrating national holidays and festivals must be important especially religious festivals. However, these celebrations need to be controlled from to avoid being commercialized and abused.

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