Time : 2021-05-19 10:02:42
Điểm: 8/10
National holidays and festivals are unique and deep-rooted in everyone’s mind. It is acknowledged that governments spend a great deal of money making them occur. Nevertheless, some people hold an opinion that money invested in organizing process is frittered away. For my money, governments should continue annually holding national holidays and festivals.
On the one hand, maintaining public ceremonies is money value on the grounds that it supports to foster other fields like tourism. In fact, national holidays and festivals are highlights of virtually every culture that grab visitors’ attention. The more people take part in those, the more money our country has. Moreover, governments do not actually squander money because organizing global festivals and holidays has positive effects on preserving ancient culture and custom. No matter how modern our society is, old-century values will surely be born in people’s mind. To exemplify, when independent day’s festivals and holidays take place, people will commemorate the gigantic service of former generations who sacrifice their life to liberate our nation.
On the other hand, some schools of thought count on that there is no point in celebrating national festivals and holidays on the grounds of wasting money. According to online Nhân dân newspaper, there are 9000 festivals every year that completely makes us start in surprise. Just multiplying, each festival costs about a few tens of millions, so Vietnamese people spend a large amount of money on festivals. Instead, governments should halt festivals and take advantage of this source of money to invest in other fields such as education, economy, politics, etc.
In a nutshell, I go along with the notion that organizing global festivals and holidays has many positive influences on our life and our country’s development. Despite costing money, festivals and holidays are the pride of the whole nation. Hence, it is worth spending.

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National holidays and festivals are unique and deep-rooted in everyone’s mind. It is acknowledged that governments spend a great deal of money making on them occur. Nevertheless, some people hold an opinion that money invested in organizing process is frittered away. For my money, governments should continue annually holding national holidays and festivals.

On the one hand, maintaining public ceremonies is money value on the grounds that it supports to foster other fields like tourism. In fact, national holidays and festivals are highlights of virtually every culture that grab visitors’ attention. The more people take part in those, the more money our country has. Moreover, governments do not actually squander money because organizing global festivals and holidays has positive effects on preserving ancient culture and customs. No matter how modern our society is, old-century values will surely be born in people’s mind. To exemplify, when independent day’s festivals and holidays take place, people will commemorate the gigantic service of former generations who sacrifice their life to liberate our nation.

On the other hand, some schools of thought count on that there is no point in celebrating national festivals and holidays on the grounds of wasting money. According to online Nhân dân newspaper, there are 9000 festivals every year that completely makes us start in surprise. Just multiplying, each festival costs about a few tens of millions, so Vietnamese people spend a large amount of money on festivals. Instead, governments should halt festivals and take advantage of this source of money to invest in other fields such as education, economy, politics, etc.

In a nutshell, I go along with the notion that organizing global festivals and holidays has many positive influences on our life and our country’s development. Despite costing money, festivals and holidays are the pride of the whole nation. Hence, it is worth spending.

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