Time : 2021-06-05 22:19:41
Điểm: 7/10
Know that gaseous emission from cars and motorcycles is the main cause of environment pollution lead to dangerous diseases but many people still have to use these vehicles to travel daily for earning their living and settle their travel needs.
As citizen’s travel needs is increasing while public transports and infrastructure are still poor like Vietnam, individual vehicles will become popular especially motorbikes. With a reasonable purchasing price then most adult from all walks of life have a motorcycle as necessary means for travelling and it is more convenient for people to go everywhere around the cities than using other means including cars and public buses. Besides that, motorbikes are used as transport tools for hawkers to earn their living daily such as farmers or small business often transport their products by motorbikes to market for selling. Above that, traffic jam problem in cities has prevented some people from biking to work even they want to join their hand on protecting environment from vehicle emission but it is not good ideas to bike in environment polluted by smoke and dust.
In order to reduce the traffic volume on the street, some solutions need to do are enriching public transport types, improving infrastructure from rural areas to cities and encouraging work from home. Beside expand more bus routes, Government need to enrich public transport types including railway, metro and train…in order to attract more people to use public transport because of convenience. Improving infrastructure in the rural areas will attract investors to open their business, create jobs for local citizens then they do not need to move far. Encouraging work from home is also the useful method to limit number of people on the road then reduce the vehicle emission.
In conclusion, Government need to build infrastructure and improve public transport types before encouraging citizens stop using private transport. Call for businesses to join hands on limit vehicle emission, protect environment before it is too late.

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Knowing that gaseous emission from cars and motorcycles is the main cause of environmental pollution that leads to dangerous diseases but many people still have to use these vehicles to travel daily for earning their living and settling their travel needs.

As citizens travel needs is are increasing while public transports and infrastructure are still poor like in Vietnam, individual vehicles will become popular especially motorbikes. With a reasonable purchasing price then most adults from all walks of life have a motorcycle as necessary means for travelling and it is more convenient for people to go everywhere around the cities than using other means including cars and public buses. Besides that, motorbikes are used as transport tools for hawkers to earn their living daily such as farmers or small businesses often transport their products by motorbikes to markets for selling. Above that, traffic jam problem in cities has prevented some people from biking to work even they want to join their hand in protecting environment from vehicle gas emission but it is not a good ideas to bike in the environment polluted by smoke and dust.

In order to reduce the traffic volume on the street, some solutions need to do are enriching public transport types, improving infrastructure from rural areas to cities and encouraging work from home. Besides expanding more bus routes, Governments need to enrich public transport types including railway, metro and train…in order to attract more people to use public transport because of convenience. Improving infrastructure in the rural areas will attract investors to open their business, create jobs for local citizens then they do not need to move far. Encouraging work from home is also the a useful method to limit number of people on the road then reduce the vehicle gas emission.

In conclusion, Governments need to build infrastructure and improve public transport types before encouraging citizens to stop using private vehicles transport. Calling for businesses to join hands in limiting vehicle gas emission, protecting environment before it is too late.

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