Time : 2021-06-08 23:08:29
Điểm: 7/10
Nowadays, since the environment is seriously polluted, people are advised to reduce their negative effects on their surroundings as much as possible. However, cars and motorcycles, which have devastating effects on environment are still widely bought and used. This essay will explain the reasons for this situation and suggest some ways to restrict the use of these vehicles.
To begin with, there are three main reasons why people still opt to buy these vehicles. Firstly, nowadays, many city dwellers are advised to cut down on emissions by using public transports, yet, there is no doubt saying that owning a car or a motorcycle helps people control their activities and time easilier. To be specific, while using public transports requires people to be punctual all the times, which is usually inconvenient, having a car or a motorcycles increases flexibility since people can decide when to leave home, when to come back home,etc.
Secondly, it is safer to use our own vehicle. Recently, there have been many serious problems recorded when using public tranports. The most serious one is sexual harrassment, which causes significant mental obession to its victims. Moreover, travelling on the same bus, train, etc makes us easily infected with respiratory illness. For instance, during coronavirus pandemic, there has been a abundance of notification used to find people who was on the same bus to Covid patients so as to avoid th outbreak of the pandemic.
Last but not least, people tends to buy cars and motorcycles run by fossil fuels instead of vehicles that are environmentally friendly because they are cheaper, more eye-catching and more abundant. For instance, on Vietnam car market nowadays, there is only one eletrical car, Vinfast VF e34 2021 is allowed to go on road, the others are only allowed to be used in resorts and tourist attractions. By contrast, there are hundreds of cars which are not run by electric or environmentally friendly resources are able to satisfy customers' hobbies on the market.
To conclude, although everyone is aware that using cars and motorcycles does harm on the environment, there is no solutions available nowadays is reasonable enough to encourage them change their ways of travelling. In my opinion, instead of trying to simulate people change their transport immediately, we shoud let that happen gradually by cutting down the price of public transports usings, creates more days when people are only able to walk or use vehicles that are environmentally friendly such as: bicycles, buses, electrical trains,etc.

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Nowadays, since the environment is seriously polluted, people are advised to reduce their negative effects activities on their surroundings as much as possible. However, cars and motorcycles, which have devastating effects on the environment, are still widely bought and used. This essay will explain the reasons for this situation and suggest some ways to restrict the use of these vehicles.

To begin with, there are three main reasons why people still opt to buy these vehicles. Firstly, nowadays, many city dwellers are advised to cut down on emissions by using public transports, yet, there is no doubt saying that owning a car or a motorcycle helps people control their activities and time easilier. To be specific, while using public transports requires people to be punctual all the times, which is usually inconvenient, having a car or a motorcycles increases flexibility since people can decide when to leave home, when to come back home,etc.

Secondly, it is safer to use our own vehicle. Recently, there have been many serious problems recorded when using public transports. The most serious one is sexual harrassment, which causes significant mental obsession to its victims. Moreover, travelling on the same bus, train, etc makes us easily infected with respiratory illness. For instance, during coronavirus pandemic, there has been an abundance of notifications used to find people who were on the same bus to with Covid patients so as to avoid the outbreak of the pandemic.

Last but not least, people tends to buy cars and motorcycles running by fossil fuels instead of vehicles that are environmentally friendly because they are cheaper, more eye-catching and more abundant. For instance, on Vietnam’s car market nowadays, there is only one electrical car model, Vinfast VF e34 2021 is allowed to go on road, the others are only allowed to be used in resorts and tourist attractions. By contrast, there are hundreds of cars which are not run by electric or environmentally friendly resources are able to satisfy customers' hobbies on the market.

To conclude, although everyone is aware that using cars and motorcycles does harm on the environment, there is are no solutions available nowadays is which are reasonable enough to encourage them to change their ways of travelling. In my opinion, instead of trying to stimulate people to change their transport immediately, we should let that happen gradually by cutting down the price of using public transports usings, creating more days when people are only able to walk or use vehicles that are environmentally friendly such as: bicycles, buses, electrical trains,etc.

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