Time : 2021-06-08 20:22:48
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Nowadays, vehicles such as motorbikes and cars are widely used. They have become an important part of people's lives. But most people know that the means of transport they use every day are bad for the environment (especially the atmosphere). So why do people use so much and what measures are in place to reduce vehicles?







The first reason is because motorbikes and cars are very convenient because they can go at a fast speed. People will not have to worry about being late for work or having to get up very early to get to work on time. Camping or going out is also easier when there are vehicles such as motorbikes and cars.







The second reason is that the prices of these vehicles are also reasonable for everyone's family. It's not too difficult for people to buy a motorbike.







Although it is convenient, it has a negative impact on the environment. If you are a person who really loves the environment, you will try to think of measures to protect the place where we live. There are a few measures that people can choose such as:







Propaganda and call on people to reduce the use of cars and motorbikes to travel when it is not really necessary. For example, when going to the market every day, choose to walk or ride a bicycle.







Or actively use public transport such as buses to not cause too much emissions for the environment. Some people will also take measures such as researching vehicles that do not use gasoline and do not harm the environment.







There are many reasons for us to protect this dear environment so right now let's start to stand up and protect the environment or also protect ourselves.

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Nowadays, vehicles such as motorbikes and cars are widely used. They have become an important part of people's lives. But most people know that the means of transport they use every day are bad for the environment (especially the atmosphere). So why do people use so much and what measures are in place to reduce vehicles?

The first reason is because motorbikes and cars are very convenient because they can go at a fast speed. People will not have to worry about being late for work or having to get up very early to get to work on time. Camping or going out is also easier when there are vehicles such as motorbikes and cars.

The second reason is that the prices of these vehicles are also reasonable for everyone's family. It's not too difficult for people to buy a motorbike.

Although it is convenient, it has a negative impact on the environment. If you are a person who really loves the environment, you will try to think of measures to protect the place where we you live. There are a few measures that people can choose such as:

Propaganda and call on people to reduce the use of cars and motorbikes to travel when it is not really necessary. For example, when going to the market every day, choose to walk or ride a bicycle.

Or actively use public transport such as buses to not cause too much many emissions for the environment. Some people will also take measures such as researching vehicles that do not use gasoline and do not harm the environment.

There are many reasons for us to protect this dear environment so right now let's start to stand up and protect the environment or also protect ourselves.

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