Time : 2021-08-10 22:42:15
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Ms. Anne Acharya,

I am writing to inform you that I received your letter of resignation. In fact, I am extremely surprised because I cannot believe that one of our company's most dedicated employees will no longer be working here. However, whatever your choice is, I always respect it and accept your resignation.

Actually, I am really impressed by your professional working  ability and attitudes. In the past six years, you have been busy working to meet demands from the company. Also, you are always willing to take on more responsibilities our company requests. ​You are one of the favorite employees of the company, and most of the employees admire you. Therefore, I would like to tell you that your resignation is a big loss to our company.

To be honest, I am so glad to hear that your skills that you have learned from our company are very useful for your career. Moreover, I am also happy to know that you will help our company to train the chosen staff who will take charge of your duties. I really appreciate it.

Thank you for your contribution to our company for the past six years. I hope that the knowledge which you have gained by our company will help you go further in your future work. Besides, I hope you will be more successful in the way you choose.

Best regards,
Mr. Don Cohen

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Ms. Anne Acharya,

I am writing to inform you that I received your letter of resignation có thể dùng mệnh đề quan hệ để giải thích cụ thể ngày nghỉ việc, vị trí công việc xin nghỉ. In fact, I am extremely surprised because I cannot believe that one of our company's most dedicated employees will no longer be working here. However, whatever your choice is, I always respect it and accept your resignation.

Actually, I am really impressed by your professional working  ability and attitudes. In the past six years, you have been busy working to meet demands from the company. Also, you are always willing to take on more responsibilities our company requests. ​You are one of the favorite employees of the company, and most of the employees admire you. Therefore, I would like to tell you that your resignation is a big loss to our company.

To be honest, I am so glad to hear that your skills that you have learned from our company are very useful for your career. Moreover, I am also happy to know that you will help our company to train the chosen staff who will take charge of your duties. I really appreciate it.bổ sung ý: Mong muốn anh ấy bàn giao xong công việc trong trước thời gian nghỉ chính thức

Thank you for your contribution to our company for the past six years để ý này ở đoạn 2, làm rõ hơn những đóng góp của Anne cho công ty. I hope that the knowledge which you have gained by our company will help you go further in your future work. Besides, I hope you will be more successful in the way you choose.

Best regards,
Mr. Don Cohen

 

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