Time : 2021-08-07 20:51:50
Điểm: 6/10
Dear Anne Acharya,
I am writing to inform you that I have accepted your resignation and you can leave your job by Thursday, March 2.
I did not realize that you had worked here for six years. Time flys. And I am happy to hear that you enjoyed and appreciated the time when you worked here. During your time with our company, you have contributed a lot to the development of the company such as growing our sales team and pineline, and helping create a great product. You are such a diligent, dedicated and friendly employee that your fellow colleagues like to work with you. Thus, everyone will be so sad to say goodbye to you. Moreover, I am happy to know that you have learned so much about marketing strategy and the digital media space here that will help you boost your career.
Anyways, thank you for your efforts to wrap up your duties and train other team members before leaving here. I would like you to give me your detailed plan about training them before 25th February.
I also hope you will become successful and we will keep in touch in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Don Cohen

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Dear Anne Acharya,
I am writing to inform you that I have accepted your resignation and you can leave your job by Thursday, March 2.
I did not realize that you had worked here for six years. Time flys. không cần thiết, thay vào đó nên thể hiện thái độ tiếc nuối khi nhận được thư xin thôi việc And I am happy to hear that you enjoyed and appreciated the time when you worked here. During your time with our company, you have contributed a lot to the development of the company such as growing our sales team and pineline, and helping create a great product. You are such a diligent, dedicated and friendly employee that your fellow colleagues like to work with you. Thus, everyone will be so sad to say goodbye to you. Moreover, I am happy to know that you have learned so much about marketing strategy and the digital media space here that will help you boost your career.
Anyways, thank you for your efforts to wrap up your duties and train other team members before leaving here. I would like you to give me your detailed plan about training them before 25th February.
I also hope you will become successful and we will keep in touch in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Don Cohen

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