Time : 2021-08-24 09:24:27
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Mary Jones,

Thank you for appreciating my expert service. I'm glad to know you like it. I'm here to help you at all times with color and trim options, as well as advice on which software program to buy.

Helping you is what I should do. I don't need your return, I just hope we can cooperate for a long time. And again thank you for trusting us with this project. I believe you will be satisfied with the results. Looking forward to hearing from you soon after the opening.

Wishing you a successful store opening and a prosperous business.

Sincerely ,

Ms. Lee

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Mary Jones,

Thank you for appreciating my expert service trong công việc gì. I'm glad to know you like it. I'm here to help you at all times with color and trim options, as well as advice on which software program to buy.

Thêm ý: Cám ơn thành ý đền đáp sự giúp đỡ của bạn, song mới từ chối nhé Helping you is what I should do. I don't need your return, I just hope we can cooperate for a long time. And again thank you for trusting us with this project dự án nào?. I believe you will be satisfied with the results kết quả gì?. bổ sung chủ ngữ và chia động từ theo chủ ngữ đó Looking forward to hearing from you soon after the opening.

bổ sung chủ ngữ và chia động từ theo chủ ngữ đó Wishing you a successful store opening and a prosperous business.

Sincerely,

Ms. Lee

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Điểm: 6.5