Time : 2021-09-28 09:54:31
Điểm: 8/10
Dear Adib,
Thank you very much for offering your ticket for the upcoming Arash concert to me. I would love to receive your ticket.
Actually, I heard about his first concert in our city about 1 month ago and I tried to buy the ticket. Unfortunately, the tickets were limited in number and were sold out after few minutes so I could not buy it. I was so disappointed until I received your letter. You know that I am a big fan of Arash so I will not miss this wonderful chance.
I am sorry to hear that due to your business trip in Turkey you cannot attend the concert. You are also a big fan of Arash so you must feel upset about that. But I know that you are such a dedicated and responsible staff so this trip is more important to you, especially you are going to do very important tasks with the new customer. I really hope your work is going well. I promise I will take lots of pictures and tell you every details of the show, especially his unheard song.
Anyway, I would like to receive the ticket on this Friday so please bring it with you when you go to the gym. Thank you again for your ticket and I hope you will have a successful trip.
Best wishes,
Tom

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Dear Adib,
Thank you very much for offering your ticket for the upcoming Arash concert to me. I would love to receive your ticket.
Actually, I heard about his first concert in our city about 1 month ago and I tried to buy the ticket. Unfortunately, the tickets were limited in number and were sold out after few minutes so I could not buy it. I was so disappointed until I received your letter. You know that I am a big fan of Arash so I will not miss this wonderful chance.
I am sorry to hear that due to your business trip in Turkey you cannot attend the concert. You are also a big fan of Arash so you must feel upset about that. But I know that you are such a dedicated and responsible staff so this trip is more important to you, especially you are going to do very important tasks with the new customer tách ý, nên chú ý especially thường chỉ dùng với danh từ chứ không phải mệnh đề mà ý này cũng không liên quan ý trước về mặt ngữ pháp. I really hope your work is going well. I promise I will take lots of pictures nên thêm ý quay video and tell you every details of the show, especially his unheard song.
Anyway, I would like to receive the ticket on this Friday so please bring it with you when you go to the gym. Thank you again for your ticket and I hope you will have a successful business trip.
Best wishes,
Tom

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Điểm: 8.5