Time : 2021-09-24 21:42:13
Điểm: 6/10
Hi Adib,

I'm doing very well and hope you are the same.

It's great to hear from you about the upcoming Arash concert. I really like Arash and I tried to get the ticket, but they were sold out so fast at that time. And you don't know how excited I am now when you say you will give me your ticket for free. Actually next Monday evening I am going to have a small party with some of my friends at the College, but I can reschedule it for this weekend. So, I definitely can attend this concert.

In order to express my thanks for your free ticket, I would like to invite you to have dinner at Red Italian restaurant after you come back from your business trip. Please let me know when you are available and I will make a reservation in advance.

By the way, it is good news that you are going to go to Turkey for signing a new contract. Wish your trip this time all the bests. Just show your good performance.

For the ticket, can I get it when we meet each other at the gym on Friday? I think it will be the most convenient for both of us.

Looking for your reply.

Thank you so much, Adib.

Tom,

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Hi Adib,

I'm doing very well and hope you are the same.

It's great to hear from you about the upcoming Arash concert. I really like Arash and I tried to get the ticket, but they were sold out so fast at that time. And you don't know how excited I am now when you say you will give me your ticket for free. Actually next Monday evening I am going to have a small party with some of my friends at the College, but I can reschedule it for this weekend. So, I definitely can attend this concert.  cần phản hồi rõ ràng hơn về thời gian, địa điểm của buổi hòa nhạc

In order to express my thanks for your free ticket, I would like to invite you to have dinner at Red Italian restaurant after you come back from your business trip. Please let me know when you are available and I will make a reservation in advance.

By the way, it is good news that you are going to go to Turkey nhầm lẫn thông tin, khách hàng đến từ Turkey chứ không phải đi Turkey for signing a new contract. Wish your business trip this time all the bests. Just show your good performance.

For the ticket, can I get it when we meet each other at the gym on Friday? I think it will be the most convenient for both of us.

Looking for your reply.

Thank you so much, Adib.

Closing?

Tom,

Bạn phản hồi cơ bản rõ nội dung chính là nhận vé đi xem hòa nhạc, và cách nhận vé. Tuy nhiên, có sự nhầm lẫn thông tin và chưa rõ ràng các chi tiết phản hồi thư đề bài. Hãy cố gắng nhiều hơn nhé.