Time : 2021-10-12 22:57:56
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Jimmy Lisbon,
Thank you for your letter telling us about the problem with my dog. I am really sorry for all the trouble I have caused you.
Firstly, I am happy to know that you have currently joined university and your major is mathematics. I understand that your curriculum is very difficult and you have to study very hard for your exams and practice problems. Thus, you need quiet time to focus on study. But my dog backed too much that disturbed your study as well as your sleep.
Actually, the dog belongs to my sister. I am keeping it for my sister while she is on her business trip for about two months. Sadly, after staying with us for about 3 weeks, the dog has not got used to this place. That is why it barked too much. Thanks to your gentle feedback, I know that it is my responsibility to keep the do quiet, especially during the late hours. Thus, I am going to take it to a vet for a check-up to find out what is wrong with it and find a solution for this problem.
Please accept my sincere apologies for the ongoing barking from the dog. I promise you it will not happen again. I hope that you will continue studying hard and become a good student at your university. if there are any other problems, please feel free to contact me.
Best wishes,
John

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Jimmy Lisbon,
Thank you for your letter telling us about the problem with my dog. I am really sorry for all the trouble I have my dog has caused to you.
Firstly, I am happy to know that you have currently joined university and your major is mathematics. I understand that your curriculum is very difficult and you have to study very hard for your exams and to work through practice problems. Thus, you need quiet time to focus on studying (Ving sau giới từ). But my dog backed too much, which (từ nối thay thế cho cả mệnh đề đứng trước) that disturbed your study as well as your sleep.
Actually, the dog belongs to my sister. I am keeping it for my sister while she is on her business trip for about two months. Sadly, after staying with us for about 3 weeks, the dog has not got used to this place. That is why it barked too much. Thanks to your gentle feedback,thiếu sự chuyển ý I know that it is my responsibility to keep the do quiet, especially during the late hours. Thus, I am going to take it to a vet for a check-up to find out what is wrong with it and find a solution for this problem.
Please accept my sincere apologies for the ongoing barking from the dog. I promise you it will not happen again dựa vào cơ sở nào bạn đảm bảo không xảy ra vấn đề này nữa khi ở trên bạn mới khẳng định sẽ đưa đến bác sĩ thú ý để kiểm tra. I hope that you will continue studying hard and become a good student at your university. viết hoa đầu câu if there are any other problems, please feel free to contact me.
Best wishes,
John đề bài yêu cầu bạn là Kate nhé (As if you are Kate, read the letter and give a suitable response.)

 

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