Time : 2021-10-10 16:37:37
Điểm: 4/10
Dear Jimmy,

We're really sorry for the bad experience you've had these past few days.

We know a college student like you needs a lot of time to focus on studying and rest to prepare well for exams. But unfortunately, due to the constant barking of the dog in my house, it is very difficult for you to concentrate and not rest.

As soon as we received your letter, we invited a veterinarian to check on the dog's health. And we swear the dog is perfectly healthy and has no problems at all. After that, we checked the maids and security guards in the house and discovered that there was a female maid who often secretly starved and abused her. Moreover, we also made a big mistake because we did not notice these things before.

You have been a good and friendly neighbor, you have always helped us when we needed it, but we have bothering you. As the dog's owner, I sincerely apologize for the noise problems you've been experiencing lately. To remedy this situation, we fired the irresponsible maid and hired another maid who was dedicated to her job.

We will definitely pay more attention to our servants and pets to avoid disturbing you as much as possible. I apologize again for all the trouble with our family that has bothered you before. And i'm sure problems like this will never happen again.

Wish you have a good exam,

Kate

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Dear Jimmy,

We're really sorry for the bad experience cụ thể vấn đề gì? you've had these past few days.

We know that a college student like you needs a lot of time to focus on studying and rest to prepare well for exams. But unfortunately, due to the constant barking of the dog in my house, it is very difficult for you to concentrate and not to rest.

As soon as we received your letter, we invited a veterinarian to check on the dog's health. And we swear the dog is perfectly healthy and has no problems at all. After that, we checked the maids and security guards in the house and discovered that there was a female maid who often secretly starved and abused her. Moreover, we also made a big mistake because we did not notice these things before.bạn cần diễn đạt lại, chú ý sử dụng từ ngữ và ngôn ngữ phù hợp hơn về vấn đề

You have been a good and friendly neighbor, you have always helped us when we needed it, but we have bothering you.
As the dog's owner, I sincerely apologize for the noise problems you've been experiencing lately. To remedy this situation, we fired the irresponsible maid and hired another maid who was dedicated to her job.để làm gì?

We will definitely pay more attention to our servants and pets to avoid disturbing you as much as possible. I apologize again for all the trouble with our family that has bothered you before. And viết hoa đại từ nhân xưng I i'm sure problems like this will never happen again.

Wish you have a good exam,

Closing?

Kate

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