Time : 2016-01-05 21:53:04
Điểm: 9/10
Dear Alice,
I was delighted after reading your letter. What the matter with you? I trust that everything is well. My birthday party, which happened nine months, was also special but in a different way. Let me tell you about it.
I woke up very early on that day because I wanted to go to the market with my mom. We bought some yellow lilies to decorate the house and many ingredients to make delicious dishes for everyone. Then my mom took me to the jewelry shop and chose a very lovely dress for me to wear in the evening.
After two hours of shopping, we came home. My mom was the busiest person on that day because she had to prepare a lot of food. Especially, my mom made a big strawberry birthday cake for me with eleven candles on it. I loved it so much. I helped her mother with the drinks. I made orange juice and banana milkshake very deliciously.
In the evening, my dad came home and helped us lay all the things on the tables. There were pizzas, cookies, toffees, and sweets. They all looked very attractive. At about 7 p.m., all the guests came and we started the party with the ''Happy Birthday'' song. Then, I invited them to enjoy the foods and drinks while watching a video about me.
My dad hired a music band coming to my house. They played music and sang funny songs to make the party livelier. At the end of the party, I opened my presents one by one and they were amazing. I got many toys, new clothes, a Princess school bag and some school supplies
I think we are very lucky children to have such unforgettable birthday parties. I hope that both of us would achieve the things we want in our new age. Write to me soon!
Best wishes,
Ngoc Thi

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Dear Alice,
I was delighted after reading your letter. What the matter with you ( câu này thường chỉ dùng để hỏi khi có rắc rối, vấn đề gì) How have you been? I trust think that everything is well fine. My birthday party, which happened was held nine months ago, was also special but in a different way. Let me tell you about it.
I woke up very early on that day because I wanted to go to the market with my mom. We bought some yellow lilies to decorate the house and many ingredients to make delicious dishes for everyone. Then my mom took me to the jewelry cloth shop and chose a very lovely dress for me to wear in the evening.
After two hours of shopping, we came home. My mom was the busiest person on that day because she had to prepare a lot of food. Especially, my mom made a big strawberry birthday cake for me with eleven candles on it. I loved it so much. I helped her mother with the drinks. I made orange juice and banana milkshake which were very deliciously.
In the evening, my dad came home and helped us lay all the things on the tables. There were pizzas, cookies, toffees, and sweets. They all looked very attractive. At about 7 p.m., all the guests came and we started the party with the ''Happy Birthday'' song. Then, I invited them to enjoy the foods and drinks while watching a video about me.
My dad hired a music band coming to come to my house. They played music and sang funny songs to make the party livelier. At the end of the party, I opened my presents one by one and they were amazing. I got many toys, new clothes, a Princess school bag and some school supplies
I think we are very lucky children to have such unforgettable birthday parties. I hope that both of us would achieve the things we want in our new age. Write to me soon!
Best wishes,
Ngoc Thi

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