Time : 2015-01-31 14:50:11
Điểm: 9/10
Dear Alice,
I am writing to you, telling about the wedding ceremony of my sister held at my house last year. On this special day, my house was solemnly decorated with red roses, carnations flowers, red candles and some red Chinese characters.
In the" aodai", Vietnamese traditional long dress, my sister looked extremely gorgeous when entering the room to welcome the bridegroom with a bouquet of roses on his hand. I saw the couple falling on their knees and kowtowing before the altar of ancestors, exchanging rings, drinking wine and inviting every relative to have a small cup of wine and a cake.
The bridegroom presented his offerings with lots of betel and areca, cakes, two bottles of wine, a box of jewelry and lots of fruits. The representative of bride accepted the offerings and invited every guest to enjoy a big party. We had a joyous party!
Write back to me.
Tai

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Dear Alice,
I am writing to you, telling to tell about the wedding ceremony of my sister held at my house last year. On this special day, my house was solemnly decorated with red roses, carnations flowers, red candles and some red Chinese characters.
In the" aodai", Vietnamese traditional long dress, my sister looked extremely gorgeous when entering the room to welcome the bridegroom with a bouquet of roses on his hand. I saw the couple falling on their knees and kowtowing before the altar of ancestors, exchanging rings, drinking wine and inviting every relatives to have a small cup of wine and a cake.
The bridegroom presented his offerings with lots of betel and areca, cakes, two bottles of wine, a box of jewelry and lots of fruits. The representative of bride accepted the offerings and invited every guest to enjoy a big party. We had a joyous party!
Write back to me.
Tai

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