Time : 2015-01-30 14:52:52
Điểm: 10/10
Dear Alice,
I'm very happy to write to you again. I'm still well but I've been busy with my study recently because I will have an important exam soon. Last Sunday, I attended my uncle's wedding in the city and it was wonderful.
When I received my uncle's invitation, I was very excited and chose my best clothes to join this event.
The wedding was held in a nice garden. There were lots of attenders and different types of flower. In the formal black suit, my uncle with his bride entered the wedding hall.
The music on that day really attracted me. I saw the couple exchange their rings and cut cake together. But the thing I like best is I was taken photos with my uncle and his bride. How wonderful!
My letter is long now so I will finish here, Alice.
Best wishes,
Dang

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Dear Alice,
I'm very happy to write to you again. I'm still well but I've been busy with my study recently because I will have an important exam soon. Last Sunday, I attended my uncle's wedding in the city and it was wonderful.
When I received my uncle's invitation, I was very excited and chose my best clothes to join this event.
The wedding was held in a nice garden. There were lots of attenders and different types of flower. In the formal black suit, my uncle with his bride entered the wedding hall.
The music on that day really attracted me. I saw the couple exchange their rings and cut cake together. But the thing I like best is I was taken photos with my uncle and his bride. How wonderful!
My letter is long now so I will finish here, Alice.
Best wishes,
Dang

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