Time : 2015-01-30 22:49:32
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Dear all,
Yesterday I went to my uncle's wedding. Now I'll tell you about it.
The wedding was held in a restaurant. The bride wore a long beautiful white dress. And she held a bouquet of yellow roses. And the couple entered the wedding hall.
My family and I scattered flowers. How wonderful ! Everybody admired to the bride and her groom. We saw the couple exchange rings, sign the wedding register and cut cake together.
However, the most enjoyable time is when the bride stood with her back to all the guests and threw her bouquet. And my mom caught the bouquet. How about you ? I want to know about your wedding. Please tell me about it. I am really curious.
Best wishes,
Linh.

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Dear all,
Yesterday I went to my uncle's wedding. Now I'll tell you about it.
The wedding was held in a restaurant. The bride wore a long beautiful white dress. And she held a bouquet of yellow roses. And the couple entered the wedding hall.
My family and I scattered flowers. How wonderful ! Everybody admired to the bride and her groom. We saw the couple exchange rings, sign the wedding register and cut cake together.
However, the most enjoyable time is when the bride stood with her back to all the guests and threw her bouquet. And my mom caught the bouquet. How about you ? I want to know about your wedding. Please tell me about it. I am really curious.
Best wishes,
Linh

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