Time : 2015-01-30 12:17:59
Điểm: 9/10
Hello Alice,
I'm very happy to receive your letter.
I attended a wedding 1 month ago. It's my uncle's wedding.
The wedding held in 4 adjacent houses so it is very large. We came here very early in the morning. We drank some tea and played. Then, we ate breakfast here. Breakfast had many delicious foods: Chicken, rice noodles, fish cooked with sauce, stuffed sticky rice cake, sweet gruel,... After that, we came to the bride's house.
There was the same bride in her house. The bride entered with long white dress. She is very beautiful likes a pretty fairy! And the bridegroom was very handsome, too. We had a big lunch here, too.
Then, the couple made their marriage vows, their parents came and exchanged their rings. They smiled very happy.
I think it is very wonderful. And it is too different from the wedding in your country. Please tell me more soon!!!
Best wishes,
Duong^^

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Hello Alice,
I'm very happy to receive your letter.
I attended a wedding 1 month ago. It's my uncle's wedding.
The wedding held in 4 adjacent houses so it is very large. We came here very early in the morning. We drank some tea and played. Then, we ate breakfast here. Breakfast had many delicious foods: Chicken, rice noodles, fish cooked with sauce, stuffed sticky rice cake, sweet gruel,... etc. After that, we came to the bride's house.
There was the same bride in her house. The bride entered with long white dress. She is very beautiful likes a pretty fairy! And the bridegroom was very handsome, too. We had a big lunch here, too.
Then, the couple made their marriage vows, their parents came and exchanged their rings. They smiled very happy happily.
I think it is very wonderful. And it is too different from the wedding in your country. Please tell me more soon!!!
Best wishes,
Duong^^

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