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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Is the staff are doing use the computer.Some scientists thik that computer will soon become more intelligent than humans
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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans.In my opinion,when machine intelligence reaches human level, there are two levels of intelligence.

1.Machines are as intelligent as humans but have the speed of thinking and computation far superior to humans.
2.Machines will improve themselves to have quality of thinking that surpass human.
At level 1, a machine may not be dangerous to humans by itself. It is only dangerous if it falls into the hands of groups with bad intentions to be used for malicious purposes. However, understanding this danger, the world will have a way of stopping like we do with nuclear weapons.

However, as I have analyzed in the previous post, once it has reached the level of being able to program itself, machines will not stop, and will reach level 2: the quality of intelligence is many times higher than that of humans. . And once taller, it will leave humans very quickly. Control is no longer in our hands now.

Imagine, on the ladder of higher intelligence, monkeys are very close to humans but far from understanding our intentions. And if we compare humans to termites - or even more so, plants - the distance is so great that the lower species do not "perceive" the higher species. Just ask, if the "machine species" grew thousands of steps above humans, how big of a difference would it be. At that time, the fact that humans tried to control the machines became ridiculous, like the narrative that controlled people. Human existence at that time will be entirely dependent on the engine of a machine.
However, the fact that machines are superior to humans does not mean the end for us. Cats are not as intelligent as humans, but that is not the reason why they go extinct. The insects, too, although very "basic" intelligence, but not only do not become extinct, but the number of species is even increasing. The existence of a species is only threatened by humankind if:
They attack or compete with humans
They are used as food, medicine, or jewelry for humans
They unfortunately lie on our way so they are "squashed". Or they are subject to "side effects" of human activities.
So, think about the question: what motive could make machines with superintelligence want to end the fate of mankind? According to Maslow, people have 5 levels of need, from basic such as eating and drinking to higher like wanting attention and recognition etc. So what is the need of machines, like humans?
Back in biological evolution, natural selection had only one fundamental goal: survival. Needs and motivations are formed and evolved as a result of fighting for this goal. Escape, hunt, sleep to survive. Mating to maintain race. Gather in herds, have a herd to increase the ability to protect and hunt. Since then, the need to attract sexual partners, the need to exchange, the need to prove themselves, be recognized, rise to the leader, etc. have gradually developed to a complex level like today's human society. I don't know why nature chooses the ultimate goal of survival, just know that if not, then today we are not here to discuss. The goal is only slightly different, the entire biological world will evolve in a very different way, even lasting for a second.

The machine is completely different. At a basic level like today's ordinary computers, humans have to program the machine to do it step by step. As the machine grows to a smarter level, people just need to give instructions, or in other words indicate the goal to be achieved, the machine will figure out the steps to accomplish it. This, however, is the same source of danger. The machine-devised ways of doing things, while effective to achieve their goals, can do great harm to humans.
Think, for the purpose of "making money", people have many ways. For example "hard work" - a "good" act. Or rob someone else - a "bad" act. For the purpose of reducing hunger, eating human flesh is extremely wrong, eating monkey meat we feel a bit guilty, eating dog meat many people feel uncomfortable; Eat chicken, beef, and pigs without care, eating vegetables or taking antibiotics to kill bacteria is completely free of guilt. Why is that, all of them are creatures! It turns out that the more species of development that are closer to humans, the more we mourn. An act of being "good" or "bad", is "right" or "wrong" is evaluated by looking into the mirror of human "moral values". The more animals "farther" from humans on the growth ladder, the more they don't look at the same mirror. Then machines, which are not even biological species, progress to the level of superintelligence on a different scale than humans - there is no reason to think that machines will by default mirror the mirror with them. me. That means, to achieve its goal, machines are willing to do "bad" things with people - this is not wrong for it. It's like in order to achieve the goal of growing vegetables, we have to pull the weeds - for pity the weeds. That's it!
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In today's world, the use of computers is ever increasing.It is one of the most important things in human life. It became a common part of modern society. Scientists think that it will become smarter than human. Some people discover that it is a positive trend, but others have a negative attitude towards this dependency on computers. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure.

One of the main beneficial developments of computers is that it made life easier and more convenient for everybody. For example, it is comfortable to sit at home and do research on the internet with your computer. Your computer is open 24 hours a day, unlike a library or office. In addition, computer technology can connect workers in different countries. Workers can communicate via email, online networks, and video conferencing. It gives people to save their time and money. Computers have automated the offices, education, banking, even the advancement of treatment and crime detection were possible due to the powerful computer technology. These examples make it clear that it is a positive increase in human life.

On the other hand, this development has its disadvantages. It can lead to the loss of the balance in society. For instance, offices will be disappearing in the future and virtual online offices may replace them. Therefore, people will become very lazy which is crucial to the way in which human develop without socialisation skills. They move toward the creation of higher unemployment. That's way there will appear two groups: humans and computer technologies.

To conclude, it is the beneficial development for human life, however, it impacts badly as well. I strongly believe that there are many advantages in the way of development and we should take advantages of it. We have made the computers and as human, we will control them.
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Nowadays, computers are so popular and they have become an indispensable part of modern life. Therefore, scientists and engineers try to research and develop them to become better and better. That makes some scientists believe that they will be cleverer than humans in a short time. I disagree with this opinion because computers are just human’s tools and they were made by human beings.
On the one hand, like other technological gadgets, computers are a tool that only can work under our commands. Nowadays, we can see computers everywhere such as laboratories, hospitals, schools, stores, and so on and they can do lots of complicated work such as surgeries, calculation. But the reality is that they cannot work by themselves. They need humans to boot up, connect to the programs or the Internet and give them instructions. For example, in every modern factory, there are lots of high-tech computers but they cannot operate without engineers. Therefore, human beings are smarter at this point because we can do everything by ourselves.
On the other hand, humans created computers to make them work for us. We know how they work, can order them tasks and improve their work to get our targets. Even when computers can do a huge amount of work, save lots of data than any person in the world but they do not have any brain to think, create ideas, and make those ideas come true. For example, besides computers, humans have made robots that can work as a nurse, waiter and so on to serve our lives that computers cannot make it.
To sum up, computers can do lots of work very well but they are just tools and work for humans. Besides, humans can create things to improve our lives such as computers, robots. Therefore, computers will not become more intelligent than humans in the future.
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Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time. From my perspective, although technology can do most kinds of work, it does not have enough cognitive and mental abilities to analyze sophisticated situations. Besides, without human operation, it cannot be run efficiently since it does not know how to maintain itself properly.

It is true that computers are superior than some people in multiple fields. However, there are certain positions which humans are irreplaceable. Content creator and doctor are typical examples. When it comes to creativity, machine cannot create hilarious contents or replicate all the senses of a human being. If a machine try to make a funny video, perhaps it will cause robotic effects, and make its audience feel bored. In terms of medical profession, there are jobs needed to be extremely meticulous. Computers are less likely to perform surgery on human body because it may cause deaths.

On top of that, finding enough energy to run itself is beyond the ability of what a machine can do. Reaching for gas is easy, but how to prevent it from rusting, especially in humid areas is a big question. Most materials used to make computers need to be maintained regularly by human. It is easily noticed that luxury car brand and airplane equip the best cover for their product comes along with the best warranty service. It proves that even a machine having the best material also needs preserving by humans.

For these reasons, computers cannot replace human in the future due to the lack of mental and self-maintained abilities.
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