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Today family members eat fewer meals together.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative trend?

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Nowadays, family members find it hard to have meals together. The major reasons for this trend are people are getting busier than ever and processed foods become so cheap and available. In my opinion, it is a negative trend.

There are some main causes of this trend. Firstly, today we are living fast-paced lives. Workers have to work different shifts or work overtime to earn enough money to live and children must attend extra classes to keep up with their studies Thus, not only adults but children do not have time for family's meals. Secondly, it is obvious that today processed foods are so available and cheap that everyone can buy them easily. Moreover, it takes a short time to buy and eat them so people do not need to spend lots of time preparing and cooking their own meals. Consequently, family members can choose their meal's time differently and do not depend on others. For example, having lunch at a canteen becomes so popular among many students nowadays. Because their parents cannot cook lunch for them and they can eat various foods including processed food that they love a lot there.

This trend definitely affects families badly. Firstly, having meals together is a good chance for family members to gather and show love and care for others. This quality family time is so precious for everyone. It makes them happy and unwind their minds. It is obvious that without love and care, life becomes meaningless. Moreover, this is a good time for parents to spend more time with their kids because they can take care of them and teach them more during meals. Secondly, processed foods are fatty and less healthy and nutritious so people who eat them for a long time may face many health issues later. Obviously, when family members eat fewer meals together, they are more likely to choose processed food, especially fast food. Thus, their health deteriorates day by day and they have to visit doctors.

To sum up, because of the fast-paced lifestyle and processed foods, family members cannot often eat meals together. This trend is negative because quality family time is reduced and people are more likely to face health problems because of unhealthy food they eat outside.
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Nowadays it is very uncommon in families to meet at a certain time and have breakfast, lunch or dinner together. I believe that this trend has happened because of the ways people balance between work and life and although busy professional activities provide us financial security, it takes the toll on an ideal family life where children might take the wrong path living.
One of the principal reasons why all the members of a family are not sitting together at the supper table is because individuals have been working more than the normal working hours since the last few decades. As time progress competitions are increasing tremendously and to survive human need to work harder than their ancestors. For example, in the past citizen's job hours were not more than six a day but now they need to spend at least nine hours. Therefore, when the breadwinner comes home , other members might be sleeping already and it is difficult to find an hour for the family meal.
Hard work pays fortune and thus it is good for the financial stability of a family. When people wake up early before their children, they miss breakfast and parents usually do this to fulfil the main necessities of the family member. However, offsprings need attention and care from their parents. Fulfilling the demand is not everything that a parent should do, they should also need to spend some periods with their family members. Sometimes if a child does not get proper attention, they take the wrong route such as start smoking, drinking alcohol and even sometimes they take life-threatening drugs like afim and heroine. Hence, it is a moral obligation for every father and mother to speak frankly with children and the best place can be at the dinner table.
In conclusion, while parents a busy making money for the future of their offspring, they miss the precious time that can be easily achievable in an eating place and as a result of it, no child will take an evil road in life.
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Nowadays, families seldom gather together at a certain hour to have breakfast, lunch, or supper together. This tendency, I feel, has occurred as a result of how people balance work and life, and while active professional activities provide us with financial stability, they take a toll on a perfect family life, where children may pursue the wrong road in life.

Individuals have been working longer than usual working hours for the last several decades, which is one of the main reasons why all members of a family are not eating together at the supper table. As time passes, competitions get more intense, and humans must work harder than their forefathers to live. For instance, in the past, a citizen's work washours were not more than six a day but now they need to spend at least nine hours. Therefore, when the breadwinner comes home , other members might be sleeping already and it is difficult to find an hour for the family meal.
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nowadays, people are surrounded by their busy life, thus the time for family meals tend to be declined. in my opinion, a healthy family is the need of everyone, therefore, having fewer family meals which means your family is lacking of interactions and it must be considered as a negative trend.
family plays a crucial role in our life because it is not only about the emotional supports, but also provides the financial supports, in where we can find people who are biologically related to each other. family meal is the time that help to strengthen the interactions between family members. as a study, people are tend to exchange more information when they are eating. therefore, a healthy and happy family can not be formed without spending time together.
about a decade ago, eating out was a treat when they were on vacations or when they want to have different kind of foods such as fried chicken, sushi. however, the development of the society has made people changed. people are having intention to dining out more than staying at home with family meals. with the facts that we are spending more time in outside than our home, so I think it's reason why we have fewer meals with family. Additionally, the immigrations had made people change the workplace and residence, and these changes made they live far away from their family then they can not spend time together.
by looking at the advantages that people receive from family, I think that we should spend more time with family. it brings many benefits to everyone, especially to elderly and children. on the other hand, I think that people who still living with their family, they may think that they've spent so much time for the family until they must live far away from home. being an international student is not easy to me, so I really appreciate the time in Vietnam with my family, the scents from my grandmother's foods that I could never find in any restaurants. home is where I can find love and be loved without any conditions, therefore, I think that having fewer meals with your family is not a good idea to try and should be reduced.
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