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Dear Evi,

How are you? I hope you and John are doing well. I can’t believe it’s been 2 years since our last vacation together!

I have been really busy with the new shop and thanks to word of mouth, sales are going great! In fact, I have even decided to have a website created for the store. Would you be interested in creating the site for me? As you know, my store sells handmade silver jewelry. I have extended the range of products to include other handmade items like ceramic figurines. I want the site to really capture the feeling of the store, which as you probably remember is kind of exotic, with souvenirs from my travels around the world.

Since I update my merchandise regularly, the site will need to reflect that. I have recently bought a very high-quality camera and some studio equipment so I am able to photograph the products myself. I just need you to set the site up and upload new photographs as they become available.

Do you think you can do this? I’d love to hear your thoughts! Of course, I don't expect you to work for free; you'll have to charge me what you would charge any client, regardless of our friendship.

I am really excited for this new adventure. I hope to hear from you soon!

Love,

Jane

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Dear Jane,
I am so happy to receive your letter after a long time. John and I are doing well and we are so excited to hear about your business. I would like to congratulate you on your new shop.
I still remember you told me a lot about your big desire for silver jewelry on our last vacation. The handmade silver jewelry which you gifted me before I still use it. They are so beautiful and exotic. I am so glad to hear that your sales are going great and you are selling other handmade items too. Moreover, you want to create a website for your shop. That is a good idea because it will help your products approach more potential customers and they can find information easily. I am interested in creating the site for you. Using your souvenirs from your travels for your website is a good idea and I will try to bring the exotic feeling of the store to viewers as your requirement.
I understand that the products on your website need to be updated regularly and you can take their pictures by yourself. When you send me new photographs I will help you upload them. I am happy to know that you already bought a good camera and some studio equipment to make beautiful photos.
I will try my best to make your site vivid, attractive and exotic. I really hope that more customers will know about your shop and like it. You are my customer now so of course, I will charge you a reasonable price. Please give me more information and photos about your shop so I can start to design it soon.
Best wishes,
Evi
Gửi lúc: 22:16:39 ngày 26-10-2021
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Dear Evi,

How are you? I hope you and John are doing well. I can’t believe it’s been 2 years since our last vacation together!

I have been really busy with the new shop and thanks to word of mouth, sales are going great! In fact, I have even decided to have a website created for the store. Would you be interested in creating the site for me? As you know, my store sells handmade silver jewelry. I have extended the range of products to include other handmade items like ceramic figurines. I want the site to really capture the feeling of the store, which as you probably remember is kind of exotic, with souvenirs from my travels around the world.

Since I update my merchandise regularly, the site will need to reflect that. I have recently bought a very high-quality camera and some studio equipment so I am able to photograph the products myself. I just need you to set the site up and upload new photographs as they become available.

Do you think you can do this? I’d love to hear your thoughts! Of course, I don't expect you to work for free; you'll have to charge me what you would charge any client, regardless of our friendship.

I am really excited for this new adventure. I hope to hear from you soon!
Gửi lúc: 20:29:57 ngày 26-10-2021
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Dear Jane

I am doing great. I have a surprise announcement to tell you that I am pregnant. I have already known it 1 month ago. John was super happy about it.
I missed a lot of sweet memories of our last vacation. Everything is like happening, I miss you so much, that makes me can’t believe for 2 years I have not seen you. It’s wild that time moves by so fast.
When I read your email, I am glad for your business growing well. Your plan is so interesting. I remember that you love to make handmade things, and you are good at doing it. All related kinds of stuff is made by you that is gorgeous, lovely, and exotic.
I am very excited about this new opportunity to cooperate with you. Now I am just working from home for my health so that I am ready to create the website for your business. I have just learned some technical technology to attract potential customers online, so it will be useful for your business.

I see the enthusiasm that you put into this so much, you spent your time to found it. I love the way you are doing. I will set the site up your photographs carefully, seriously. Then I upload photographs on the website that would be appropriate for every theme you want.

About the fee, I will take it depending on how our website growing rapidly, so you should not think of it too much. I hope your business, your plan increases rapidly
No matter what you work, I always encourage you until the end. Good luck with your new plan. I know you are going to do great.
 Love
Evi
Gửi lúc: 20:19:40 ngày 26-10-2021
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Dear Jane,

I am doing well. Thank you so much. I hope that this letter finds you healthy. We are so hectic with our dreams and work so time goes by like a wind. You and I have not met since the last two-year vacation. I also miss you and our travel.

I am infinitely glad when I know that your business is going swimmingly. Since you sell handmade silver jewelry and you want to expand the market, I think that it is vastly beneficial as you create a distinctive site. By doing this, your special products such as ceramic figurines, various souvenirs, etc are more likely to be ubiquitous to many people.

Besides, an outstanding camera and studio equipment support you to have lots of beautiful and attractive pictures, which will easily grab people’s attention. To be honest, hardly had I received your letter and knew that you invited me to design a site when I were on cloud nine. In addition, you give me a salary if I help you at either end. I appreciate those things. Indeed, I really want to be your assistant. Nevertheless, as you know, I do not have so much experience and knowledge in designing work. I am afraid of not being able to create a good site for you. I am sorry to say that I cannot help you. I think you should seek a designer specialist who will make a great contribution to designing a super wonderful site for you.

Thank you so much for your offers,

Wish you have a successful business,

Yours faithfully,

Evi.
Gửi lúc: 20:09:53 ngày 26-10-2021
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Dear Jane
Thank you for your letter, I am interested in jewelry, too. But I don't know how to make it. I think I can learn it form you. It's very beautiful. So I can make a web of a store for you because I am free for 2 months so I can do it like you help when I have difficult so don't worried, I will try my best to help you. It's very easy to make a store web because when I was a child, I have the first prize of Information Technology of National so it easy for me. That's why I think I can do it. You know, we are best friend and you always help me when I meet difficult so this time is the occasion that I help you. So I work free for you. Thanks a lot about all think that you help me!
Love
Evi
Gửi lúc: 16:01:34 ngày 26-10-2021
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